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FEEDBACK

Newspaper Assignment Feedback

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Article Website Feedback

​ENGLISH FEEDBACK (from Angela Liu and Esther Leung)

  • the colours can be adjusted to fit the scheme better

  • like the design

  • like the writing and paragraphs

  • like the organization and colours (not too flashy nor boring)

  • a bit too word-based

    • maybe add pictures in between paragraphs to make reading easier​

  • it could relate to English a little more

  • create a top art

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FRENCH FEEDBACK (from Tyrus Chan)

  • The main heading text is a bit difficult to read

  • The animation is a bit too fast on the video link parts

  • I think its good

French Subject Page Evaluation Presentation

​From Carina Huang

  • ​the colours look super nice and consistent

  • pictures are clear and fit the topic

  • a few of the icons can be sharper, but they still match the vibe

  • clean, well organized, lots of space (doesn't look messy)

  • fonts could use bigger size but are clean and stylish

  • pictures and text match

  • simple and clear title (know what page is about)

  • strongly relevant to French and covers everything

  • style: looks very clean and pretty good

  • small problem when the subject page is clicked (rickroll)

French Webpage Feedback

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Math Subject Page Evaluation Presentation

​From Ben Tran

  • Colours: Harmonious, consistent, contrast and aligns well

  • Images are high quality, consistent, has pop-up and alt test

    • Some not really supporting the main point​

  • Graphics similar to images

  • Balanced graphic distribution and ample whitespace

    • clear visual hierarchy​

    • visible complementary font

    • highly readable

    • consistent font usage

  • Clear, highlighted CTAs

  • Consistent tone​​

  • Decent scannability​​

  • Informal tone

  • Missing bullet points but not necessary

  • Excellent contrast

  • Decent flow

  • Title: clear, relevant, reflect central idea and theme

  • Excellet content, but adequate importance

    • missing thesis statement​

  • Clear explanation and definition, subject application

  • Outline specific knowledge and skills gained

  • Relevant trends and cases

  • Main points summarized 

  • Main points reinforced

  • Missing future outlook

  • Highly engaging

  • clear language

  • tone is too informal

  • good flow and transition

  • missing citation

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Improvements

- Improve images' relevancy through writing articles revolving around images or use images relevant to articles​

- Formal wording: avoid usage of 1st and 2nd person pronouns and pause within articles, avoid wordiness while incorporate fancy terms​

- Incorporating bullet points​

- Place images on left for a clearer flow

By Antonia Fong for Computer Studies 9

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