FEEDBACK
Newspaper Assignment Feedback
Article Website Feedback
​ENGLISH FEEDBACK (from Angela Liu and Esther Leung)
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the colours can be adjusted to fit the scheme better
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like the design
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like the writing and paragraphs
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like the organization and colours (not too flashy nor boring)
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a bit too word-based
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maybe add pictures in between paragraphs to make reading easier​
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it could relate to English a little more
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create a top art
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FRENCH FEEDBACK (from Tyrus Chan)
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The main heading text is a bit difficult to read
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The animation is a bit too fast on the video link parts
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I think its good
French Subject Page Evaluation Presentation
​From Carina Huang
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​the colours look super nice and consistent
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pictures are clear and fit the topic
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a few of the icons can be sharper, but they still match the vibe
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clean, well organized, lots of space (doesn't look messy)
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fonts could use bigger size but are clean and stylish
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pictures and text match
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simple and clear title (know what page is about)
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strongly relevant to French and covers everything
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style: looks very clean and pretty good
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small problem when the subject page is clicked (rickroll)
French Webpage Feedback
